TALE WRITING WORKSHOP 4th SESSION CREATIVE WRITING PART 1

This time the teacher presented a new power point with the following contents:

1.Working with connectors and linking words.

2.Working with verbal tenses used for narrating events.

3.Working with adjectives, similes and associations.

4.Text invention.Finishing  a story

The teacher introduced them the main connectors and linkers and showed them

 some pictures so that they made up a story using them , adding connectors of

 sequence and the past simple.This was a kind of preparatory exercise to make

 the students learn how to use the connectors and their  imagination to invent a

 short story before starting to write their own Indian tale.

SOME OF THE STUDENTS WROTE A VERY SHORT PARAGRAPH USING CONNECTORS
AND PAST SIMPLE BY MAKING USE OF SOME PICTURES;ALL OF THEM RELATED TO
INDIA AND ITS CULTURE:
PICTURES USED:

STUDENTS´ WRITINGS

Once open a time  there was a girl called   Jyothi .One day she went first to the temple and then she prayed to God .She made chapathi

She went to Tower Clock by ato . After that she wore  a saree .Then she went to Tower Clock again.Later the she went to a dance school. After that she danced kuchipudi very well. Next  she went to Isckon temple and finally she came back home. By Chandrakala

Once upon a time there was an ancient Lord    Ganesha temple. It was by Clock tower. It was a religious temple. People went by auto to the temple. All women wore sarees to the temple. They looked beautiful. Every Saturday there was a small cultural and traditional Kuchipudi dance programme in that temple.By Leela

Once upon a time there was a Ganesh.He was nice and he ate chapathi.

After that he went to see some children dancing Kuchipudi.He went to Tower Clock

He saw first such a big traffic in Tower clock so he took an auto and he went

shopping and he bought a sary that was pink  for his girlfriend.

Finally, he came back to his hostel.

By Manju

Once upon a time there was a girl called Nissy.One day she celebrated Vinayaka Chavithi very well,on that day she prepared Oliga and other sweets.Then she went to Shobha Center by  Auto.After this she bought a new model of saree in Shobha Center.That saree was pink.Next, she went to visit Tower clock where she spent some time to see it.Then she visited a dance ,this was Kuchipudi dance,She liked it a lot.After that she went to Isckon Temple to visit it.Finally, she came home safely.

                                                                                         By Mariyamma

Once upon a time there was a boy named Gowtham. One day he went to Anantapur to meet his sister who was in a Kuchipudi school. He met her and he gave one saree to her as a present.Then he went to Iskan temple and Ganesh temple.After visiting these two temples, he ate chapati in Tower Clock Circle. Finally, he went home by Auto. 

-By Neelu

Once upon a time  I went to Anantapur. Firstly, I arrived at Tower Clock.It was amazing ,then I prayed for Ganesh in the temple as well as people wearing saries .Then I took an auto vehicle

to the restaurant and I had Chapathi. Finally ,I saw a dance class of Kuchipudi.It was amazing

Short paragraph written by Anu  

 Once upon a time I went to Tower-clock. After that I took an auto, then I went to    

   Iskhan Temple.After that I prayed to Vinayaka. Then, after this, I ate Chapati    

  for  breakfast in a restaurant. That is near to Iskhan temple. Next I went to the  

   dance school where some children were learning Kuchipudi.Finally, I returned      

 to  Tower-clock. I got a saree for a Birthday party.By Shravani

 

Once upon a time there was a big city called Anantapur. It was a very big and beautiful city, However it was also very chaotic.

In that city there was a girl, named sindu. She lived with her family. She was very beautiful . Moreover, she could dance very nicely.

One day her father asked her to prepare him some chapati with curry because she could cook very well. Then she went to her kuchipudi class. Later, she and her family went to Iscon temple. She wore a blue saree for the occasion. 

By Agnes

Once upon a time I went to Iskon temple which is very beautiful .This was near the outskirts of Anantapur. I went to the temple and I wore a saree.I entered into the temple and I prayed for God .After this I went outside  and I went home by auto.later I went shopping near Clock Tower. After finishing my shopping I went to Ganesha temple.In that temple a Kuchipudi dance took place.Finally, when I returned home I had chapati for lunch.

By Shandia

Once upon a time there was a temple called Iskon in the outskirts of Anantapur.People went to the temple to pray for Krishna.Women were wearing sarees  to go to the temple.Beside Iskon temple, there was also a lord Ganesh temple.In Iskon temple one day they performed the Kuchipudi dance program.One day I went to temple and when I returned  home I had Chapati near Clock Tower.

By Sowije

Once upon a time there was a girl whose name was Pranitha.She was very intelligent and she was very good at kuchipudi.There was a Ganesh temple beside Tower clock and she usually went to Ganesh temple with voliga to keep Naivedhyam for Ganesh .When she went to the temple she used to wear a saree.She usually went to Ganesh temple and Iskhan temple.
By Pushpa

                                             Once upon a time there was a girl called Seethe. Every morning she prayed to Ganesh. After that she cooked chapati with curry, later she had breakfast and then she went by auto for work. Sometimes she wore a sari, later she went to a temple  named Isckon. She learnt Kuchipudi because she went to a dance school. Every day she went to the dance school ,she crossed Tower clock and finally she reached the dance school.

 By Pullamma

Once upon a time there was a girl called  Swathi who lived in Anantapur .  She was wearing a saree.  The  saree was red.  She looked very beautiful.  One day she went to another town and she prepared her lunch box.  After this she visited Iskhan temple.  She spent some time there and then prayed to lord Ganesha and next she ate chapaties and carry.  Finally, she returned back home and practised kuchipudi.  She was always happy. By Saraswathi
 Once upon a time there was a girl  named  Geetha . She knew how to dance kuchipudi  and one day she  peformed  at Ganesha  temple on the festival of Vinayakachavithi . On the day of the festival, she ate chapathi and later, wearing a saree, she went to Iskcon temple, which was at Tower Clock,  by auto.By Suneetha.

Once upon a time  there was a girl. She lived in a small village and her name was Janaki. She believed in Ganesh. First , she woke up at 6 o‘clock then she prepared  some special items such as sweet chapati , next  she wore her new Sari. After that she went to Tower clock  and then she called one Auto and next she  got into the Auto .She went to Ganesh temple and  then  she prayed for Ganesh  temple .Finally, she danced  Kuchipudi.

By Suvarna

Once upon a time there lived a girl called Priya. She was a beautiful girl. She liked lord Krishna, lord Ganesha and Kuchipudi dance a lot. One day she got up very early and went outside. First, she took an auto to Iskon temple and prayed for Krishna, then she saw a Ganesh statue in a temple and prayed for him ,too. After that ,she came home and ate chapati and next she wore a saree .Finally, she went to her kuchipudi class.

By Alekhya

Once upon a time there was a woman called Vijaya.She was a married woman and she had a girl called Sreelatha. Sreelatha was 12 years old

, she was learning Kuchipudi dance near Clock tower and she used to go by Auto. On Ganesh Chathurdhi day ,Sreelatha wore a saree and her

Mother prepared a sweet chapathi so they brought it to  Ganesh

Temple.

By Kalpana

• Once upon a time there was a town called Anantapur. I t was beautiful. In Anantapur lived a girl called Deepthi. Daily,she went to school  by auto. After that she attended her school lessons as well as dance classes. Then she went to Ganesh temple with her friends. Next she ate chapathi at night. After that she talked with her parents. Finally she did her homework.

By Madhavi

1. Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl named Anagha. She was an excellent kuchipudi dancer and also she was a big devotee of lord Krishna.  She didn’t want to  marry. She offered her life to lord Krishna ,for that reason she always danced in front of the lord .She didn’t like to dance in front of people and she lived in Isckon temple.
2. Every day she woke up at 4.00 o´ clock, then she went to the pool by auto .There,she took a bath .Later, she worshipped Ganesha and she offered him some sweet chapathi .After that, she came back to Isckon .
3. One day one person saw her in Tower clock area and he wanted to marry her but she didn’t agree with him .He followed her and she escaped from him.She went into Isckon temple and she hit herself with knife and she asked Lord “my Lord I want to be left alone with you” after that she died.  God merged her into him and Lord punished the man.

• By Mounika
• Once upon a time there was a man named Manju.  She believed in Vinayaka so  she prepared some sweet chapati for him. After that,she went to the temple by auto. Next she wore a beautiful  sari for   a festival.Some time later, she went shopping to Tower Clock. Later she attended a dance class. Finally, she went  home near Iskon temple.
  By Barathi
• Powerpoint done by Sree